Your analyses are indeed perceptive and informative, and I welcome them.

However, listen to an old retired lawyer. STOP using "cages." It conveys the image of animals in real cages. This use of "jail" or "imprisonment" detracts from your textural validity. When I reach that word, I just stumble; it is frankly too pejorative, if that's possible.

Frank Clifford

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